高二作文“中学生听MP3”

高二作文“中学生听MP3”

　　假如你是李华，最近你班就“中学生听MP3”的现象进行了一次讨论，请你将以下讨论结果给某英文报社编辑（editor）写信，客观反映情况。词数100左右。

　　1. 时髦；2. 听英语焕发精神；3. 听英语提高英语水平。

　　1. 浪费时间、影响学习；2. 总听对听觉有害；3. 浪费金钱。

　　1. 合理利用；2. 控制时间。

　　参考范文

　　Dear Editor,

　　Recently, our class had a discussion about whether middle school students should listen to MP3 player.

　　40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so. Besides, you can relax while listening to the music. Thirdly, with the help of MP3 player, we can listen to English and improve our English level. Others, however, hold the opposite idea. Firstly, it has a bad effect on our studies as it takes time. What’s more, listening too much does harm to the hearing. Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.

　　In my opinion, we should make good use of an MP3 player and limit the time for listening if we do want to use it.

　　Yours,

　　LiHua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

　　【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语agree with同意；listening to；with the help of在…帮助下；have an effect on对…有影响；What’s more更多的是；do harm to对…有害；a waste of浪费…；

　　考点： 提纲类作文