学生作文:Weekendsaremyfavorite(网友来稿)

发布时间:2016-9-15 编辑:互联网 手机版

作者:夏铭

For most kids, weekends are a mixture of fun and work. So are my weekends. Now I talk about what I often do on weekends. On Saturdays I finish my homework first, then I help my mother do the housework-clean the rooms, wash clothes, water flowers and so on. On Sundays, I usually watch TV for about two hours at home. Sometimes I go to the park with my parents; sometimes I go to visit my grandparents in the country. I think my weekends are great! So I like my weekends best!

点评:本篇习作用语流畅,语言较为地道。习作者能运用学过的语言,阐述"周末是我的至爱"。从另一个角度也点明了本篇写作意图:如何看待周末?如何度过周末?值得同龄朋友的深思!这是篇较佳的习作!